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Натали: А что с фанфиком от Оленьки? Я не совсем поняла-он не до конца переведен или это у меня проблемы?
Мария: Я только что прочитала рассказ о Сэнди и Керри... Чувствую себя счастливой, несчатсной... и горе, и счастье - все слилось в одну бурю эмоций... Это прекрасно - то, что я только что прочитала. Я выложу в следующем обновлении. И только этот рассказ будет стимулировать меня двигаться быстрее. Я хочу, чтобы его прочитали все. Он прекрасен. Как прекрасны стихи в этом рассказе. И я никогда не думала о Сэнди так. Хотя теперь мне кажется, что так я думала о ней всегда. Для меня нет большего счастья, чем прочитать истинно прекрасную вещь. Я не буду говорить о метафорах и сравнениях, которые буквально пригвоздили меня к креслу - своей точностью, изящностью и уместностью... Я не буду говорить о мылях и чувствах, которые всколыхнула во мне эта история... Я просто хочу сказать: спасибо, Дик! Сказать прилюдно, а не в письме. Спасибо. Твой рассказ - прекрасен и совершенен. С искренним уважением. Маша
Дик: Спасибо, Маша. Если интересно, то стих написан поляком во время 1 Мировой войны и называется "На рассвете". Начало у него такое: Дорога от сердца к сердцу дольше письма в разлуке, но будит нас плачь кукушки, и сердце считая звуки, в тебя, как в дальние дали, гляжу с последней ступени, слова твои запоздали, мои же слететь не успели.
Дик: ЧЕ Предлагая продолжить фантик, у меня не было особых иллюзий, что кто-то за это возьмется. Смотреть, как герои, о которых будто бы знаешь все, начинают жить своей жизнью,.. особенно этот черный офицер с древним Амберовским именем…Такое бы мне в голову никогда не пришло. И тем интересней читать и перечитывать твое произведение, надеюсь не последнее на этом сайте, надеюсь ты не обидишься, если и я предложу свой вариант продолжения «Возвращения»? И если хочешь пообщаться, я всегда к твоим услугам.
Че: Я не то что не обижусь, буду в восторге ( как и от 2 х предыдущих твоих работ), даже осознавая, что моя при этом безнадежно поблекнет ...на этот счет не питаю иллюзий....как в анекдоте чукча не читатель, чукча-писатель... я скорее наоборот... а ты действительно -классно пишешь....недавний, но уже преданный поклонник Че
Мария: Я просто в восторге! Знаете, меня все чаще посещает и согревает мысль, что нам удастся совместными силами создать настоящий архив произведений о Керри на русском языке! Когда я начинала делать сайт, у меня были мысли, что, вот, сейчас я выложу свои фанфики, потом то, что есть Зоиных, потом наш совсместный... а потом - буду почивать на лаврах и перечитывать то, что есть снова и снова Как же здорово, что у нас уже столько авторов, да не просто авторов - а бесподобных!!! Спасибо вам всем! И тем, кто пишет, и... тем, кто читает! Не было бы читателей, и писатели бы вымерли за ненадобностью О, какую речь выдала
Starley: ну ничего себе! А все ж по-русски было?! Это значило следующее: Есть несколько фанфиков про Керри, которые, как я знаю, хотела бы прочитать Маша. Правда они на английском, а вот с ним у меня БОЛЬШИЕ проблемы. Хотела заказать перевод в бюро переводов, но это слишком дорого((( Вот и хотела спросить-может откликниться кто и пеереведет фанфики для нашей Машуни, пока она там на солнышке греется? Фанфиков несколько и выкладывать их все я не буду, так что, если кто-то решится, то напишите мне click here Black Out Category: Kerry/Carter romance. Setting: Beginning of season 7, Carter has just come back from Atlanta Rating: Nc-17 for graphic sex scenes Spoiler: No spoilers! Summary: Kerry and Carter are in Miami for a conference when a storm leaves them without power in their hotel room. But they will find how to have a good time nonetheless. Title: Black out Author: Dr.Kerry, aka ScullyЎЇs revenge in the x-files fandom Rating: NC-17 Classification: Kerry/Carter relationship Timeline: Set at the beginning of season 7, Carter has just come back from Atlanta. Kerry and Carter are in Miami for a conference when a storm leaves them without power in their hotel room. But they will find how to have a good time nonetheless. Disclaimer: Kerry Weaver and John Carter do not belong to me, but to Warner Bros. IЎЇm just borrowing them for a while to have a little fun with them. Feedback: Sure! Good and bad on the list or privately to Dreaming_of_Zion@libero.it AuthorЎЇs note: Many thanks to Shawn who beta-read this! You saved my day! Kerry Weaver passed a handkerchief on her damp forehead to dry the sweat from her overheated skin and took a deep breath, filling her nostrils again with hot, humid air stuffed with a strong smell of sweat that made her feel nauseous. The two ceiling fans were working full blast, she could tell that from the fast whirling of the plastic blades over her head and the characteristic noise they produced whipping the stagnant air, but the room was far too big and crowded with doctors that all the efforts to drop the temperature of the conference room were useless, and most of the people in the room were fanning themselves with the conference program in the attempt to find some relief from the Florida heat. The speaker looked as hot and tired as the spectators as he ran a hand through his spiky grey hair and loosened the knot of his tie. Dr. Stephan was a middle-aged trauma physician, and, as far as Kerry remembered, a damn good one. They had worked together at Sinai hospital, he was Chief resident at the time of her ER rotation. He was showing slides that illustrated the use of sternum saw in emergency rooms, and several of them featured her and some of the members of her staff performing on different patients. She sighed, and wondered why the hell Romano had sent her there to listen to a conference she could have held herself. She was sure that little bald elf had done it on purpose. CarterЎЇs grandmother had agreed to give a new funding to the ER, and there was going to be an important meeting to discuss the innovations and changes the money would bring in the department, but since her and Romano had completely different opinions about what should be done more urgently he thought he could get rid of her for some days with the conference excuse. And she was not the only victim of his diabolic plan. She shot a sideways glance at Carter, who was sitting at the other side of the room, sucking absently at the end of his pen. They had arrived late and didnЎЇt find two adjoining seats. Carter had given up taking notes about half an hour earlier. His handwriting had gone from neat and straight at the beginning to a series of messy scribbles as the humidity seeped in his skin, making concentration more and more difficult to maintain. He sighed, thinking longingly of a cold drink and the air conditioning of his hotel room. Their hotel room, he corrected himself. Obviously the hospital had not enough money to sustain two doctors in a cheap Miami hotel for three nights with a single room each. He suspected it to be also illegal, being them of opposite sex. Luckily the food wasnЎЇt bad and the room was provided with two twin beds, air conditioning and TV. But maybe he wouldnЎЇt have minded a queen sized bed either, he thought, turning his head to look at Kerry and smiling at her bored, quite annoyed expression. And despite that, she still looked beautiful. This was still classified information, but he and Kerry had started dating just two weeks earlier, after a long friendship, and things were going well. Very slowly, but well. He was grateful to Kerry that she had agreed to take a step at a time. He was just putting the pieces of his life back together after ValentineЎЇs day and his recover from his addiction to painkillers, and he had still so many questions and fears to come to terms with. He needed his time to come to terms with LucyЎЇs death and the guilt he felt at the thought of a possible future with a woman, love, happinessЎ-things she couldnЎЇt experience anymore. Dr. Silver, his psychiatrist, had also advised him not to get involved in a relationship with anyone for some months, and focus on his recover, but he trusted Kerry to be, as a doctor, perfectly aware of what they were running into. They had shared their first kiss two days before they left for the conference, on their third date. It was short, and their tongues remained each in its ownerЎЇs mouth, but it moved more emotions inside him than he had ever experienced with any of his others girlfriends. Since that moment he had been looking forward a replay and maybe something more, but circumstances seemed to be just against them, as they had never managed to find themselves alone in a safe enough place for more than thirty seconds since then. Maybe this conference was the occasion to discuss and take some steps forward in their relationship. When he thought he was really going to faint from the heat and smell of the room, Dr. Stephan told his assistant to turn off the slide projector and dismissed the doctors, not before he reminded them of the next dayЎЇs conference about the multiple use of epi in emergency rooms. Carter sighed heavily at the thought of another couple of hours stuck in that room and walked among the crowd leaving the room towards Kerry, who was talking to Stephan. Kerry introduced him to the older doctor and explained how they met when they both worked in New York. Ў°You can go, IЎЇll be upstairs in a few minutes.Ў± She told Carter as she handed him the key of their room. Carter grabbed the key and said goodbye politely before leaving the room. He was too tired and hot to wait for Kerry, and he couldnЎЇt wait to take off his clothes and lie down on the bed. *** By the time Kerry was back, Carter had already refreshed himself, changed into a t-shirt and pajama shorts and turned on the air conditioning, and was now enjoying an old rerun of Ў°The NannyЎ± spread on the fresh cotton sheets, changing position every now and then to make sure no part of his overheated body was deprived of the beneficial effect of the AC. Ў°Sorry it took me so long, but Dr. Stephan wouldnЎЇt stop chatting.Ў± Kerry said as she entered the room, carrying a mug full of ice cubes, a couple of cans of Coke and two chicken salads. Ў°We even talked about Doug Ross.Ў± She mocked, remembering the stormy relationship she had had with him, and how she had been relieved when he left County. Carter rolled lazily onto his side to face Kerry, who was now bent to put her load into the little fridge and unconsciously giving him a very nice view of her firm, round behind. Carter grinned to himself and raised his eyebrows in appreciation. Ў°WhatЎЇs the ice for?Ў± He asked as Kerry flipped off her shoes and directed towards the bathroom with her night clothes under her free arm. Ў°For the coke. I thought we may have dinner here tonight. IЎЇm actually too tired and bored from the heat and the conference to go out or even downstairs.Ў± She replied from the bathroom, her voice muffled. Ў°Do you like chicken salad? I can go back downstairs and get you something else if youЎ-Ў± Ў°No, itЎЇs ok. I donЎЇt think I can bring myself to eat something hot anyway.Ў± Carter interrupted her. Chicken salad sounded good. And maybe he could have a Snickers from the mini bar for dessert. He had already recuperated some of the weight he had lost during the bad times he had gone through, but he was supposed to put on other ten or fifteen pounds and do some sport to recover his debilitated body. He was wondering whether he had time to do some serious workouts in a gym when Kerry emerged from the bathroom. She was in a clingy tank top and shorts, and she had her hair pulled up in a pony tail. She flopped onto the bed and ignoring the TV she retrieved a big, heavy book from the sports bag next to her bed, and set the postcard she used as a bookmark on the nightstand, she locked her eyes to the pages. Taking advantage of KerryЎЇs moment of relax, he caught the occasion to study her without her knowing. It was the first time he saw her bare-legged. He had always seen her in long pants. Even outside the hospital, where pants were not necessary for practical reasons, she had worn a skirt just once. And it was ankle-length. Carter knew it was because of her bad leg, but as he was staring at KerryЎЇs not long, but muscular, well-shaped legs he didnЎЇt understand what she was ashamed of. Then, as she shifted, he noticed several surgical scars go from her knee all the way up her thigh and disappear under the hem of her shorts. They stood out sharply against her pale skin like a criss cross of roads on a map, but Carter didnЎЇt feel his desire for her subside. In fact, if that was possible, his heart swelled further with love for her. He sighed softly and shot a last glance at Kerry before returning her attention to the television, but he wasnЎЇt listening carefully to the dialogues between the characters. His mind was still on Kerry and how he would like to hold her and kiss that pale skin anywhere his mouth could reach. He yawned and rolled onto his side, his surroundings becoming more and more blurred to his sight and the image of him and Kerry together in bed taking shape in his mind as he drifted off a contented sleep. *** About half an hour later a powerful thunder startled Carter out of his peaceful sleep. Ў°God, what was that?Ў± He muttered in a sleepy voice as he sat up and quickly rubbed the sleep off his eyes. His eyelids felt as heavy as lead and he was struggling to keep his eyes open. On the other hand, his muscles felt just wonderful when he stretched, the stiffness of being stuck in the same position for two hours in the conference room gone. Ў°It started ten minutes ago. I wondered how you could sleep with that noise.Ў± Kerry said. The open book laid abandoned at the end of the bed as she, propped on both elbows, watched the sky from the window. Ў°I'm a deep sleeper.Ў± Carter stifled a yawn as he crossed the room and sat on KerryЎЇs bed to have a look at the weather himself. The sun was obscured by a thick mass of black clouds hovering over the city, whose many lights just contributed to make the violet sky look creepier. Their sight was blurred by the heavy rain lashing against the window, but they could clearly see ramified lightings break the clouds and light the sky for a fraction of second, immediately followed by deafening thunders. The light in the room flickered for a moment. Carter shuddered and moved away from the window, while KerryЎЇs eyes were still glued to the window, her mouth slightly open, amazed at that display of the power of nature. Ў°Storms in Africa, those were scary. You just had to pray the water didnЎЇt reach your house.Ў± She said softly and slowly, then finally she turned her head and her gaze settled on Carter, sitting beside her, and smiled. Carter smiled back, and shifted his weight to sit closer to Kerry. Knowing what was about to happen, she licked her lips in anticipation and moved a lock of rebel hair out of the way, waiting patently for Carter to capture her mouth with his. The distance separating them was minimal, yet Carter felt like an entire ocean was between them as his anxiety stretched every second in an hour and thousands of thoughts raced through her mind. What if Kerry had changed her mind and didnЎЇt want him anymore? What if he wasnЎЇt a good enough kisser? Trying to push his uncertainty aside, he gently tilted his head and closed his eyes, ready to the wonderful feel of KerryЎЇs soft lips on his. Their mouths were almost touching when the electrostatic tension in the air outside produced a lighting that fell near the hotel with a terrible noise, startling both of the doctors, who suddenly found themselves in the dark. Ў°What happened?Ў± Carter said, his voice betraying the disappointment for being interrupted in that moment of intimacy. He felt the rustle of sheets and got a glimpse of KerryЎЇs shadow moving around on the bed as she once again looked out of the window. Ў°Well, looks like a good part of the city is without power.Ў± Kerry muttered and then leaned out the edge of the bed to fumble into her bag. Next moment, Carter was blinded by an intense light directed into his eyes and groaned aloud. Ў°Sorry.Ў± Kerry said. She was holding a flashlight large enough for them to clearly see their surroundings, and she was looking around to see if there was any sign of electricity left. Ў°The air conditioner is dead as well, damn it.Ў± She cursed. It would have been simply impossible to sleep with that heat. Ў°IЎЇm never going away for a conference again, no matter what Romano says.Ў± She complained, getting up and fumbling into a small cupboard to retrieve candles. Ў°These are scented, but they should work nonetheless.Ў± He mumbled. Ў°You lit some of them up, so I can use the flashlight to go downstairs and ask someone information.Ў± Carter suggested. He pulled out of her bag a pair of blue jeans and changed into them. He wasnЎЇt going to show up in the hall with pajama shorts. Ў°IЎЇll be right back.Ў± He was about to open the door when Kerry grabbed his wrist. Ў°DonЎЇt go, itЎЇs dark and you donЎЇt know who you could find in the corridors.Ў± She pleaded. Ў°You couldЎ-not feel well.Ў± She mumbled. Carter knew she was referring to his panic attacks, he had had more than one in her presence. He took the hand clenched around his wrist with his free hand and brought it up to his mouth. Ў°DonЎЇt worry, IЎЇll be all right.Ў± He said as he kissed every fingertip and then the palm before leaving her hand and disappearing in the corridor. *** After a few minutes, the lack of air conditioning was making Kerry sweat and slightly panting again. She was used to the record temperatures of the African savannahs, but the humidity made the weather unbearable. The contact of the sweaty sheets with her overheated skin annoyed her as she moved restlessly in the vain attempt to find a more comfortable and fresh position. At the end she got up from the bed and aimed straight at the bathroom, where she carried some candles with her. The tub was looking at her invitingly as she settled and lighted the candles, then turned both the hot and cold water taps, enjoying the feel of cool water refreshing her hands as she closed the plug and water started filling the tub. She stripped off quickly and when the water was to the edge, closed the taps and settled down so that she was immersed in cool water to her chin, which gave her body an immediate relief. She sighed in contentment as she leaned against the wall of the tub, which was exactly the right height for her to rest her head comfortably. Soothed by the small waves softly caressing her skin, and the steady sloshing of the rain outside all thoughts left her mind until a new thunder pulled her back to reality, reminding her that Carter wasnЎЇt back yet. She shot a nervous glance at the clock he had settled on the bathroom counter and although she didnЎЇt check the hour when Carter left she thought he had been away for about fifteen minutes. She was starting to get worried and was about to leave her little corner of heaven to call him on his cell phone when she heard the door squeak open and the familiar sound of his trainers on the floor, followed by his low voice muttering something inaudible and then her name being called. Ў°IЎЇm in the bathroom.Ў± She called back, sinking back into the water, relaxed and glad now that he made it back to the room safely. She could still feel her fingertips tingling where he had placed his lips earlier as that same hand traveled down her body and sneaked between her legs, cupping first and then slowly stroking herself. She stifled a moan as she did so, imagining it was Carter touching her like that. Moments later she heard knocking at the door and KerryЎЇs restless hand left her now throbbing sex just in time before Carter entered the room, greeting her with a smile. He was quite surprised to see Kerry looking like a child just caught with the hand in the cookie jar, her cheeks bright red and a guilty smile on her lips. He also noticed the unusually dilated pupils that were concealing the emerald green of her irises and thought that maybe her hand wasnЎЇt exactly in a cookie jar. The thought of her touching herself in the tub while he was in the adjacent room made him shiver with arousal. Ў°It seems we wonЎЇt have power back for at least a couple of hours.Ў± Carter said, deliberately trying to ignore the signs of KerryЎЇs excitement and not to peek into the tub, where her body was barely concealed by a thin layer of white foam. Kerry sighed in disappointment at the news and sank even lower in the tub, leaving only her eyes above the surface of the water. Ў°I see youЎЇre enjoying yourself in there.Ў± Carter said matter-of-factly, trying to get a glimpse of her breasts while he pretended to be watching her push bubbles out of her mouth from underwater. Ў°Do you think this tub is large enough for two?Ў± He asked then boldly, and immediately regretted it. She had agreed to take their relationship at his pace, but this may be too much for her, knowing how self-conscious of her body she was. Ў°ItЎЇsЎ-uhmЎ-very hot out here.Ў± He added in a desperate attempt to save his situation. Ў°I could use some cool water.Ў± KerryЎЇs eyes went wide and her stomach clenched at the implications of his question. That meant him and herself both naked in a tub. Some minutes earlier she had entertained herself with the thought of Carter touching her intimately, but fantasizing was a thing, having him naked so near her was another. She let out a silent sigh and frowned thoughtfully. Her rational self was telling her it was too soon, that she could just go back to her bed and leave him the tub, but the disappointment for their interrupted kiss and the unmistakable signals coming from her lower belly drove her to another conclusion. Ў°MmhЎ-I guess IЎЇm small enough for you to fit in.Ў± She finally told him, enjoying the relieved expression on his face as he struggled to lower the zip of his jeans, which seemed to be stuck. Ў°CarterЎ-Ў± Carter was vaguely aware of KerryЎЇs voice and eyes on him as her gaze locked to where the stuck zip was just moments earlier and now showed a tantalizing inch of pale skin and the hem of black, silk boxers. Ў°Are you going to watch me while I undress?Ў± He asked, hands at his hips, ready to get rid of his clothes. Ў°I guess I need a little privacy.Ў± He said jokingly as she blushed and averted her eyes from his body, so he proceeded and stripped off, piling his clothes neatly on the stool near the basin. *** Carter cleared his throat when he was ready, provoking an uneasy sigh from Kerry, who pulled herself up into a sitting position, arms modestly covering her breasts as she waited for him to settle down. She lowered her gaze to the surface of the water, which was now going through a very violent micro-storm as Carter joined her in the tub. She fixed her eyes on a group of foam bubbles floating next to her knee. Studying its movements intently as she tried not to think about his legs stretching in the water, rubbing against hers as he did so, or his crotch, so dangerously close to her lower back she was afraid the smallest of movements would bring them to a kind of physical contact that wasnЎЇt in her plans for this trip. Ў°Quite fascinating, is it?Ў± He broke the awkward silence, referring to the bubbles she was still observing absorbedly. Ў°Well, uhЎ-yeah.Ў± She sank a hand in the water, dispersing the bubbles, and let out the breath she hadnЎЇt realized she was holding. She couldnЎЇt see him, but she could feel him smile at her sudden shyness as he put a cool hand on her bare arm, stroking it gently in small up and down movements. She wasnЎЇt one to loose her composure so easily, but Carter had managed, since heЎЇd asked out not as a friend but as his date, to bring on the surface long forgotten feelings of awkwardness from her adolescence. Ў°Come on, relax.Ў± He said as his hand moved up to her shoulder and pulled her down towards himself, gently, without forcing her. She drew in a deep breath as she slid towards the end of the tub and lay down on him, her back against his chest and her head nestled in the crook of his neck. Ў°SoЎ-Ў±he started, setting comfortably his arms on the edges of the tube and staring up at the white ceiling, dimly illuminated by the candles, which where releasing a faint smell of cinnamon. He hoped a little of small talk would help him take his mind off the feeling of her wet skin against his and fight off the temptation to look down at her breasts, which she was trying to protect from his sight with an arm flung casually over her chest. Without much success actually, he acknowledged as she shifted in search of a more comfortable position for her bad leg. He swallowed hard and returned his gaze to the ceiling as he threw at her the first question that came to his mind. Ў°What will you do about the funding thing? I mean, with you absent at the encounter Romano will divert all the money to emergency surgery.Ў± Ў°I know, but I donЎЇt think thereЎЇs much I can do once the money is assigned, which will happen tomorrow morning.Ў± She reminded him, her tone betraying her frustration. Ў°I can give Gamma a call later and tell her our problem. After all, where her money goes itЎЇs her decision, and I suppose she wonЎЇt deny her grandson a favor.Ў± Carter offered. Being useful always made him feel good. Ў°That would be great, thanks.Ў± Ў°Good. Then IЎЇll call her as soon as weЎЇre done with the bath.Ў± He said, but he actually wasnЎЇt any willing to leave the coolness of the water and KerryЎЇs company. She nodded, stretching an arm to open a small window next to the tub, hoping the rain had cooled down the air a bit. They fell silent after that, both looking out of the window into pitch blackness. The downpour had eased down a little, but the storm was still strong over the city. Lightings filled the sky with a gloomy light, casting threatening shadows on the still city and thunders echoed in the clouds above them so violently they were tricked into seeing the walls of the bathroom sway before their eyes. The air smelled strongly of rain and ions, prickling their nostrils along with the cinnamon perfume coming from the candles. Ў°Anyway, what was that you were reading so eagerly earlier?Ў± He asked her, playing absently with a loose strand of rebel hair that had somehow escaped KerryЎЇs hairclip. Ў°The last Harry Potter book.Ў± She said nonchalantly, then frowned as he chuckled. Ў°What is it?Ў± Ў°Who could have imagined that Kerry Weaver of all people would read childrenЎЇs books?!Ў± He said, a smile of genuine surprise on his face. Ў°Well, itЎЇs very well-written and the story is interesting. As far as I remember, you never were a great reader. You should really try and read more, you know, instead of frying your brain with television.Ў± She suggested, receiving a disappointed moan from him. Ў°Come on, IЎЇll talk to Dr. Silver, see if we can meet after work once a week to do a bit of reading together, which would increase our allowed meetings to two a weekЎ-Ў± She offered, her voice low and soft as one of her hands accidentally-on-purpose brushed his hip. CarterЎЇs fingers stilled in her hair as he turned his head and gently kissed her temple, murmuring a Ў°thanksЎ± into her ear, his hot breath tickling the sensitive skin there. The sweet sensation left on her skin by his lips followed a tortuous path along her nerves, settling finally in her lower belly, intensifying the lingering warm feeling there caused simply by his close proximity. Ў°What for?Ў± She looked up at him, frowning but keeping her voice gentle. Ў°For doing this, you know. Being always there for me, distract me from bad thoughtsЎ-Ў± He slipped an arm around her waist, gently caressing her side, and sighed in relief as she relaxed further in his embrace and covered the hand resting on her ribcage with hers, giving him all the comfort he needed. Ў°When IЎЇm with you, IЎ-Ў± he paused for a long moment, gathering words that seemed to be escaping him. Ў°I feel like IЎЇve really gotten past everything. You gave me my life back, Kerry, and IЎЇm so grateful to you for this.Ў± He said softly, almost in a whisper, as he tightened his hold on her and pressed his lips to her hair. And she knew he meant it, that every word that came out of his mouth was true and heartfelt. It was that that scared her, that he would become too involved in a relationship whose future was still highly uncertain. Always if he already wasnЎЇt. An eventual failure of their experiment as a couple would just alienate what of good had been done since then. It was dangerous to lead him like that, but KerryЎЇs thought were starting to blur in her head as her brain and nerves focused on the external distraction of CarterЎЇs hand gently exploring her stomach, stroking the pale skin there, encircling her navel, and his lips moving from her temple down her jaw line in butterfly kisses. She brought the arm previously covering her breasts up to his face and grazed his cheek with her fingertips, leaving wet tracks on his skin as she moved her hand to the back of his neck and pulled him gently down to her, catching his lips in a soft kiss. *********************************************** Here we go with part 2...the story is obviously not finished yet. This is the updated beta'ed part... Enjoy, and...sorry it took so long... *** What had begun as just a brush of lips soon turned into a searing kiss when Carter started nibbling at KerryЎЇs lower lip, his tongue gently probing. Her lips parted instinctively, allowing him in, her own tongue massaging his as he explored the inside of her mouth, relishing her sweet, unique taste. With a thumb he caressed the underside of her left breast, making her moan at the unexpected touch. Ў°I thought we were taking this slow.Ў± Kerry panted after they parted several minutes later. Ў°We said at my pace. Who ever talked about slow? Ў± He replied, equally breathlessly, his lips curled up in a small grin. Kerry opened her mouth as if to speak, but she couldnЎЇt come up with any reply, so she just shook her head, smiling back at him. He had won. Carter closed the gap between them once again, meeting her in a long, sensuous kiss as their bodies shifted in the tub in order to find a more comfortable position for mutual exploration, sending water splashing on the floor near the tub. Tongues slow danced to an imaginary love song and hands followed paths of dunes and valleys, moving intently in their discover of virgin territory. Kerry pulled away with a gasp at the feeling of JohnЎЇs fingers running gently through her soft mound of curls, playing with them and venturing down to brush her labia. She shivered, sucking air in through her teeth. Ў°Do you think I didnЎЇt know what you were doing earlier?Ў± He said, his voice low as he cupped her sex, caressing her in small up and down movements. She tilted her head to the side, eyes questioning him beyond the veil of arousal that had her pupils dilated again. Ў°When I entered the bathroomЎ-I knew you were touching yourself.Ў± He started to feel a familiar wetness on his fingertips that had nothing to do with the fact that they were immersed in a bathtub. He teased her lower lips apart, fingers gently probing at her sensitive opening as he crooked his head to kiss her neck. A low moan escaped her slightly opened mouth and she started rocking her hips against his hand, the feeling of cool water on her hotness while he stroked her almost unbearable. Ў°I could tell from the way you lookedЎ-Ў± He whispered in her ear as he flicked his thumb over her clit, sending sparks of electricity throughout her body. His eyes remained fixed on her face as he slipped one, then two fingers inside her, watching her eyelids flutter and the muscles in her neck tense as she swallowed down a whimper. It was her turn to smile at his sharp intake of breath when she slid an arm around his, anchoring herself to him as he started to move in and out of her in long strokes. Her lips parted softly and her head lolled back, resting on his shoulder as CarterЎЇs free hand traveled up her body to her breast, fingers moving in a spiraling movement up her soft hill to the sensitive areola and nipple, that stiffened immediately under his touch. She sighed and a chill ran down her spine despite the heat as he teased her clit with his thumb in circular movements. He could tell from her ragged breath and flushed face he was having on her the desired effect, and feeling bold, he took her earlobe between his lips, nipping and pulling gently as he increased the speed of his movements below. Ў°John.Ў± She panted unsteadily, and gathered what little control she still had of herself to tantalize him back, featherlike fingertips trailing over his thighs, carefully avoiding the places where he ached to be touched the most and where his own arousal was starting to become evident, pressing painfully against the small of her back. John never thought she could look so beautiful in the heights of her arousal, leaving the mask of composure she always wore to show the more natural, primal side of herself. He felt every muscle tense in her body as she squeezed her eyes shut and climaxed, gasping his name and riding every single wave as they spread through her body, her nerves purring with bliss, relishing a pleasure she had too long denied herself. The grip around his thighs finally loosened and Kerry let her eyelids flutter open to meet his deep, chocolate brown eyes. She just smiled. She had always had a thing for his eyes. Not that they were particularly beautiful, it was just a pair of brown eyes, like a thousand else she had seen, but what she read in themЎ-they were the eyes of an old man and of a child at once. They conveyed all the sorrow and pain he had seen and suffered in such a way that at times holding his gaze became too overwhelming for her, his anguish mingling with hers, making her wish she could just turn back time and spare him everything he went through, that she was able to make it all go away. Other times it was just innocence, pure naivetЁ¦, which used to be accompanied by an enthusiastic sparkle of life she hadnЎЇt seen for so many months. Until now. It could have been the flicker of a candle flame reflected in his eyes or just a trick played by her over-stimulated senses, but she swore she saw it. Innocence, joy and love, as he bent to kiss her once again. It was too late now. She figured that taking their time in this relationship would have given her time to think and to deal with her own sentimental problems. And she just proved again to be too impulsive. Which clashed irreconcilably with her wanting to have everything planned and under control. It was fundamental in her job, act fast and do the right thing. Follow the instinct. But the success she had as a doctor was only matched by the complete failure of her love life. His lips touched hers and she sighed into him as she ran a wet hand through his short, soft hair, pulling him close, willing him to clear her mind of every thought. But it wasnЎЇt that simple. Kerry felt she was responsible of his welfare, too, and she wasnЎЇt sure she deserved the unconditioned trust he gave her, knowing he relayed so much on her frightened her. Her own feelings for him frightened her. But she didnЎЇt want to let him down, she wouldnЎЇt let herself be scared away by all the would-bes that commitment held. She wanted to do it right that time, do it right for him. For them. She kissed him again and then started to sit up, careful not to put too much weight on Carter. She braced herself on both edges as a wave of dizziness hit her and her sight blanked for a moment. Ў°WhatЎЇs wrong?Ў± He asked her, his tone slightly alarmed. Kerry smiled to herself. He was always so protective. Ў°Nothing, my BP must have gotten a little low by spending so much time in the water andЎ-wellЎ-Ў± A grin painted on CarterЎЇs face as she looked at a loss for words to describe their earlier activities. With a little help from Carter Kerry managed to get safely out of the tub and wrapped herself in a large terry cloth towel. As he stepped out of the water as well he shook his head like a dog, spraying water droplets in every direction. Ў°You do something like that in *my* bathroom and youЎЇll do the ironing for the rest of your life.Ў± Kerry warned him as she handed him another towel. He flashed her a guilty grin as he tied it around his waist and got an amused roll of eyes as a response. Ў°This one room thing isnЎЇt that bad after all.Ў± Carter said suggestively after he put on some fresh boxers and flopped on his bed. Ў°Maybe Romano this time did us a favor, what do you think?Ў± She asked rhetorically as she sat down next to him and leaned in for a kiss. He accepted her lips eagerly and pulled her down to him, his hands roaming restlessly on her back, searching a way to sneak under the wet towel that stuck to her body like a second skin. She suddenly pulled away, eliciting a disappointed moan from her lover. Ў°IЎЇm starved. Why donЎЇt you take our dinner out of the fridge while I put on something more decent?Ў± Ў°Please. I like you indecent.Ў± He smiled mischievously, his eyes never leaving KerryЎЇs small figure as she retrieved clean clothes from her case and disappeared once again in the bathroom, leaning on her crutch for support. Ў°So, you coming over for dinner?Ў± He joked, setting their dishes and drinks on his bed. The bucket of ice drawn his attention as well. The temperature in the room was still unbearably hot and the lights would be out for a considerable amount of time. The fact that they were keeping the room lit with candles wasnЎЇt helping much to the situation, and after only a few minutes out of the tub he was already sweating copiously and wishing he was back to ChicagoЎЇs mild summer. He set the bucket on the nightstand and popped a cube in his mouth. It gave him just a momentarily relief, but it was better than nothing, and he welcomed the feel of the tiny streamlets of water sliding down his dry throat as the ice slowly melted in his mouth. John was about to have a second one when Kerry emerged from the bathroom, clad only in a pair of nike black shorts and a matching sports bra that hugged her generous breasts deliciously. He arched his eyebrows in appreciation, studying her as she climbed on the bed and settled against the headboard, her bad leg stretched in front of her. Sensing his gaze upon her, she met his eyes, a hint of a smile playing on her lips as she questioned him. Ў°Well?Ў± Ў°If I remember your exact words youЎЇd said you wanted to be Ў®decentЎЇ.Ў± He started, handing her her chicken salad and a plastic fork. Ў°Now there, this nice little thing of yours is not exactly conservative, is it Kerry?Ў± Carter teased, ignoring his own meal for a moment as he reached out and hooked his index finger under one bra strap, tugging gently at the stretchy fabric. Ў°If you havenЎЇt noticed, itЎЇs kind of hot in here...Ў± Kerry paused as she chewed on a forkful of chicken and slapped CarterЎЇs hand, which was trying to lower the strap from her shoulder. Ў°And thereЎЇs no point in sweating even more to cover what youЎЇve already seen. Besides, you are even less dressed than me.Ў± She continued in a lower tone as she nodded towards the towel around his waist. The knot that secured it was coming loose, threatening to expose John Truman Carter in all his naked glory. Ў°Mphh.Ў± His mouth also full, he grunted as he reluctantly let go of his dinner and went in search of clean underwear. A pair of Ў®Stars and stripesЎЇ baggy cotton boxers. Ў°Cute.Ў± Kerry stated as she eyed him. Ў°Feeling patriotic, I see.Ў± In point of fact she wasnЎЇt totally surprised by his choice in underwear. It was actually very Ў®CarterЎЇ, and she wondered if he had more of these in that bag of his and at home he could show her. *** Here we go with part three...not beta'ed sorry...all mistakes here are mine. *** They ate in companionable silence, reaching out to touch each other every now and then and listening to the steady pounding of rain on the windows and the thunders that exploded sporadically over the city. It looked like the storm wasnЎЇt going to fade off just yet. Thankfully by then it had pleasurably cooled the temperature down a bit, making the lack of air conditioner more tolerable. Kerry eventually wiped her mouth with a napkin and set her now empty plate on top of CarterЎЇs, which had been resting on the nightstand for several minutes now, along with a Snickers wrapping,. Why couldnЎЇt the guy eat like a human being? She wondered whether he even chewed on his food before swallowing it. Taking a long sip from her coke, she looked down at his lying form, still but the regular rise and fall of his chest as he breathed. His arms were folded under his head, and his long legs stretched out as he stared at the ceiling, fascinated by the maze of cracks on the white paint. Ў°Penny for your thoughts.Ў± Kerry spoke in a soft voice not to startle him. Carter turned his head, letting his gaze linger on her, and smiled at her as one of the hands that was cradling his head closed around her wrist, caressing the soft skin on the inside as he pulled her gently towards him. Ў°Nothing, I was justЎ-Ў± He shrugged and put an arm around her waist as she settled beside him, her back resting against a pillow and one leg entwined with his. She bet she already know what he was going to tell her as he shifted a bit, looking slightly uncomfortable. Ў°UntilЎ-uhЎ-earlier I thought I was never gonna, you knowЎ-Ў± He nodded towards his crotch. Ў°I mean, before and during my rehab I had other things on my mind, and even when I started feeling better I never dared touching myselfЎ-I was too scared it wouldnЎЇt work, that IЎЇll never be able to have...you know.Ў± Now that he had admitted it to someone besides Dr. Silver, and had finally overcome the problem, he felt like a heavy burden was lifted from his stomach. The corner of KerryЎЇs mouth lifted just the fraction of an inch at his inability to actually say the word Ў®erectionЎЇ. She thought that as a doctor he had long gone past that stage. Ў°I think you just needed to relax and forget your demons for a while.Ў± She rolled onto her side, her hand coming to lie on his chest, drawing lazy circles on his smooth, slightly tanned skin. A gesture that held no sexual meanings on her part, but that CarterЎЇs body seemed to interpret differently. Ў°You did a great job of distracting me.Ў± He mumbled and turned his head to trail wet open mouthed kisses down her jaw line, getting nearer and nearer to her mouth as his free hand began an accurate exploration of her bare stomach, leaving her skin tingling wherever his fingertips touched her. He captured her lower lip between his teeth, nipping and pulling at it teasingly before pressing his mouth to hers, his tongue seeking entrance that was immediately granted. Her fingers tangled in soft strands of brown hair, pulling him closer as she craned her neck at an angle to deepen the kiss, her own tongue fighting her way past his to explore the inner contours of his mouth; the lingering taste of chocolate and peanut in his mouth eliciting her already over-stimulated senses even more. They pulled back what could have been just moments or minutes later, both gasping for oxygen. He busied himself with her neck, his lips warm and gentle as he kissed and licked the soft skin over her pulsing artery, relishing in the fact that her heart was beating so fast because of him. One of his hands followed a path of hills and valleys down her left side and back up, lingering on the soft curve of her waist as he tenderly pressed her against him. She moaned at the feel of their bodies molded together, her breasts rubbing against his chest at their every breath and their crotches not quite touching as John slipped his leg further between hers, gently parting them. When she tried to kiss him he moved his lips out of reach and flashed her one of his irresistible grins as he flipped them over, trapping her beneath him with his body. Only then he allowed their eager lips to meet, their tongues lazily battling for control as hands roamed slowly on each otherЎЇs body, taking their times in memorizing every inch of the otherЎЇs skin, testing with trembling fingers what the other liked the most. He had just found her sweet spot at the hollow of her neck when the shrill ringing of the phone unceremoniously interrupted them. John groaned in disappointment and reluctantly rolled off her, stretching his arm to pick up the receiver. Ў°Carter.Ў± He tried to keep his voice steady and his breathing under control, not wanting to betray his state of excitement. The voice that reached his ears a moment later had exactly the sought effect on him as well as on Kerry, whose eyes went saucer wide as she heard RomanoЎЇs annoying, muffled voice spilling out of the speaker. Ў°Hey, my favorite ex-addict. HowЎЇs Miami? Bet you met some of your drug dealer frieЎ-Ў± Ў°What do you want Robert?Ў± Kerry had snatched the phone from CarterЎЇs hand, already fed up with his ass-hole attitude. Ў°Just checking up on you guys.Ў± Robert said casually. Ў°Making sure you arenЎЇt harassing the young man, sneaking into his bed at night, you know.Ў± JohnЎЇs eyes went as wide as saucers as if he had just sat on a hedgehog and his lips formed the silent words Ў°He knows!Ў± Kerry shook her head and gestured for him to stay calm, her free hand resting on his forearm. Ў°You could just have gotten us two rooms. I bet Anspaugh wouldnЎЇt be happy to know you put a resident and an attending, of the opposite sex, mind you, in such a situation.Ў± She retorted sharply, and that seemed to silence him. Kerry heard him clear his throat uncomfortably at the other end of the line and a distant happy bark from Gretel. Ў°UhЎ-I heard thereЎЇs a bad storm going on there, you two all right?Ў± She rolled her eyes. Ў°What a lousy actor you are, reallyЎ-pretending youЎЇre worried for usЎ-Anyway, itЎЇs no hurricane, and weЎЇre going to survive without electricity for a while. Now, if you donЎЇt mind, IЎЇd like to go back to my dinner.Ў± She finished, making him understand the conversation was over. They exchanged cool goodbyes and finally Kerry slammed the receiver down in its cradle, muttering under her breath. Ў°Someday IЎЇm going to hurt him bad.Ў± She slumped back down on the bed, snorting. Ў°I really thought he had somehow understoodЎ-about us, I mean.Ў± Ў°HeЎЇs been making assumptions since when you lived in my basement, and I donЎЇt really think heЎЇs actually suspecting something. He just enjoys driving me mad.Ў± Kerry followed his movements as he picked up the phone once again and started punching a series of numbers he looked familiar with. Ў°What are you doing?Ў± She frowned. Ў°Calling Gamma.Ў± John flashed her a grin. Ў°IЎЇll make sure some of the money gets diverted to the ER. A return gift for our favorite surgeon.Ў± ***
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жданова: Starley Только, только выдалась свободная минутка и я прочитала твой фанфик "Рубеж". Сказать, что мне произведение понравилось - это ничего не сказать. Мне ОЧЕНЬ понравилось!!!
Lubasha : Starley Лен, ну ты хотя бы проверяла после того как постишь текст или у тебя одной все буквы видны? . Я сначала думала, что это спам.....
Starley: Любаш, да я проверяла(((
Мария: А я совсем не в тему. Очень хочу написать новый фанфик. С сюжетом - полный аут. И я даже не могу выбрать, о КОМ писать. Т.е. писать я буду о Керри - это 100% факт. Но хотелось бы о ней с кем-то в паре. Может, у кого есть какие-то пожелания.. или , я не знаю, предложения? Пока муза моя спит. Хоть бы по приезду домой она очнулась... как бы мне ее разбудить Не считайте, что я пьяна или чокнулась Типа метафорами решила выразиться
жданова: Мария пишет: Пока муза моя спит. Хоть бы по приезду домой она очнулась... как бы мне ее разбудить Лето, солнце, море пляж курортные романчики будят не только воображение
Julia: У меня есть пожелание : хотелось бы видеть рядом с Керри Эбби, не знаю почему, может просто в последнее время увлеклась фанфиками об их отношениях И еще, может что-нибудь романтично-приключенческо-детективное? А вообще, Маша, здорово, что у тебя появилось желание писать и не важно, о ком а музу будем как-нибудь будить
Дик: Starley Наконец-то твое произведение появилось на сайте. Очень убедительно. И продолжая твое сравнение: даже «НС» распались, но от этого не проиграли. И теперь мы знаем такую проникновенную, такую женственную Свету Сурганову, как Керри.
Дик: Маша, как тебе пара с Моррисом. И каженся у Хелен была еще одна дочь. Может они решат пообщаться? Замутят какой нибудь детективчик.
Starley: Дик пишет: Наконец-то твое произведение появилось на сайте. Очень убедительно. Ну, ты уж меня захвалила))) Спасибо большое
Starley: жданова пишет: Сказать, что мне произведение понравилось - это ничего не сказать. Спасибки большое!
Че: Дик тебе на мыло письмо приходило мое?... чего-то не отвечаешь.....жесткий спам? или это значит мне "выпить яду" ! давай поболтаем как-нибудь...
Дик: Идея сумасшедшая, но в чем-то ты права. 10 сезон, сезон «Эбби» пропитан отношениям этих женщин, начиная с 3 серии, когда Керри единственная заметила, как Эбби плохо и, кончая ее попыткой помочь той в получении диплома. Но для этого надо чувствовать Локхарт и как-то обосновать причины, толкнувшие ее перейти этот «рубеж». Но мне показалось, что ты из тех, кто видит с Керри Ким. Я вообще то не читаю незавершенные произведения, но было трудно устоять. Не знаю по какими критериям ты выбрала именно «Икоту». Видно, что автор с большой любовью и уважением относится к К/К, не пренебрегая деталями, которые добавляют достоверности повествованию, а ты сплетаешь этот узор из слов в миф об этих невероятных женщинах. Можно ли ждать в сентябре продолжения?
Julia: Дик , если я правильно поняла, последнее сообщение адресовано мне? Да, действительно, если меня спросить, с кем бы я хотела видеть Керри, я отвечу - с Ким. Причины этого уже не раз озвучивались на форуме Машей, я с ней полностью согласна, поэтому повторяться не буду. (если захочешь поговорить подробнее-пиши в личку ) А Эбби? Не могу сказать, что хорошо ее знаю или понимаю. Но с ней у Керри были хоть какие-то отношения, тень дружбы. К тому же, я считаю, что в Керри трудно не влюбиться поэтому... почему бы и не пофантазировать? А что нам, несчастным фанатам, остается делать? Насчет "Икоты": мне очень нравятся произведения этого автора, и к тому же оно одно из первых, которое я прочитала на английском, зацепило почему-то. И мне очень приятно получить комплимент из уст настоящего писателя, которым, без сомнения , ты являешься. А продолжение обязательно будет, только вот решу некоторые личные и технические проблемы.
Мария: Julia пишет: А продолжение обязательно будет, только вот решу некоторые личные и технические проблемы. Конечно, Юлечка, не торопись! Обещаю, что я (и все благодарные читатели ) обязательно дождусь! Чего-чего, а терпения нам всем хватает выше крыши! Если мы до сих пор поклонники Керри Уивер Дик пишет: «Икоту». Видно, что автор с большой любовью и уважением относится к К/К, не пренебрегая деталями, которые добавляют достоверности повествованию, а ты сплетаешь этот узор из слов в миф об этих невероятных женщинах. Дик, ты просто замечательно сказала! Присоединяюсь целиком и полностью Юля, спасибо за чудесный фанфик Дик пишет: Идея сумасшедшая, но в чем-то ты права. 10 сезон, сезон «Эбби» пропитан отношениям этих женщин, начиная с 3 серии, когда Керри единственная заметила, как Эбби плохо и, кончая ее попыткой помочь той в получении диплома. Но для этого надо чувствовать Локхарт и как-то обосновать причины, толкнувшие ее перейти этот «рубеж». А я сезон "Эбби" не смотрела... практически... И вообще... начиная с 7 сезона, можно все последующие назвать сезонами Эбби. Ее так много... но я не об этом... У меня такая сейчас проблема. Очень хочется написать что-нибудь о Керри. И ни одного сюжета в голове. Одна надежда, что, сев к монитору, мне удастся открыть портал, из которого авторам снисходят идеи, но... пока не знаю И я начала забывать старые сезоны, даже 7. И я не смотрела полностью ни одного сезона, начиная с 9. Досмотрела до 6 серии включительно. И дальше как отрезало. Нет, я видела "места Керри", но не все. Даже их не все. Даже не представляю, что можно с этим сделать. И пересматривать я сейчас не смогу, даже не из-за нехватки времени, а просто потому, что пока все, связанное с сериалом, слишком остро воспринимается... не знаю, как точнее объяснить... А Эбби... Эбби я любила в 8 сезоне. И только в 8. Очень хорошо ее чувствовала, понимала... могу сказать, что если не было Керри, я могла бы выбрать своей героиней Эбби 8 сезона. И я до сих пор не понимаю повальную любовь к Эбби. Потому что ее много показывают? Потому что ей дали в пару сначала Луку, а потом Картера? Эбби - очень непростой персонаж. Сложный. Противоречивый. Неудобный. Не карамельный. Не приглаженный. Даже актриса - не эталлон красоты, хотя мне она и нравится внешне, но... ей далеко и до Кэрол, и до Клео, и до Джинни, и до Сьюзи... И возрастом она тоже не так подходит спятившим подросткам, кричащим "Эбби навсегда" в своем фанатском безумном многонациональном порыве... К чему я? Отвлеклась Сорри... Я лишь хотела написать, пока меня не понесло в сторону, что первыми моими англоязычными фанфами были фанфики о Керри и Эбби. Очень хорошие, длинные фанфики. Поэтому для меня союз Эбби и Керри не выглядит ни странным, ни неожиданным Почему-то так в мозгу все утромбовалось, что иногда мне кажется, что роман между Керри и Эбби показали даже в сериале
Дик: Julia Julia пишет: Дик , если я правильно поняла, последнее сообщение адресовано мне? Да, действительно, если меня спросить, с кем бы я хотела видеть Керри, я отвечу - с Ким. Причины этого уже не раз озвучивались на форуме Машей, я с ней полностью согласна, поэтому повторяться не буду Извини, у меня 4 лапы и все задние:), правда, иногда я помогаю себе хвостом
Julia: Дик пишет: Извини, у меня 4 лапы и все задние:), правда, иногда я помогаю себе хвостом Ничего, главное, чтобы они двигались в нужном направлении Мария пишет: Я лишь хотела написать, пока меня не понесло в сторону, что первыми моими англоязычными фанфами были фанфики о Керри и Эбби. Очень хорошие, длинные фанфики. Маша, а какие именно?
Мария: Julia пишет: Маша, а какие именно? Ой, Юль, сейчас не вспомню Но помню, что Эбби все время первая начинала раздеваться (то из душа выйдет, то в душ войдет) И помню сцену у дерева. Что там у дерева происходило, так слету не вспомню Дома посмотрю, может, вспомню - самой охота перечитать
Julia: Так, про дерево и душ я еще не читала Как вспомнишь, скажи, я тоже хочу почитать
Мария: Julia Юлечка, хотела написать тебе в личку, но раз уж зашла в эту тему, Я ПОЛУЧИЛА ПРОДОЛЖЕНИЕ ФАНФА! Оно пробирает до кости! Просто отличное! Очень сексуальное! Спасибо тебе, дорогая!!! Я обязательно тебе отвечу! Не думай, что я такая хамка (хотя наверное, хамка и есть), но у меня катастрофически не было времени на этой неделе! И, Оленька, твое продолжение я тоже получила!!! И почти уже выложила! Спасибо! Керри и Лука ПОЧТИ СДЕЛАЛИ ЭТО! УРА В следующее обновление обещаю выложить много фанфов!
Julia: Ура! Скоро будет обновление! А то вы меня заинтриговали "Возвращением" до потери пульса Мария пишет: Я ПОЛУЧИЛА ПРОДОЛЖЕНИЕ ФАНФА! Оно пробирает до кости! Просто отличное! Очень сексуальное! То ли еще будет
Мария: Julia пишет: То ли еще будет ЕЩЕ сексуальнее???? Ууууууу... я ж теперь не дождусь!!! Наберитесь терпения, у меня вроде получается на этой неделе просвет - займусь сайтом
жданова: Мария пишет: Я ПОЛУЧИЛА ПРОДОЛЖЕНИЕ ФАНФА! Оно пробирает до кости! Просто отличное! Очень сексуальное! А-а-а-а-а-а где??? Я тоже хочу!!! Машунь, ооооочень хочется побыстрее увидеть обновления , ну и тебя
Дик: Julia пишет: То ли еще будет Если не секрет, а сколько всего глав в этом шедевре?
Julia: Он небольшой, всего 6 глав
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Мария: У сайта скоро день рождения Обещаю поднапрячься и выдать обещанные фанфики
ray: Здравствуйте)) Еще не совсем разобралась в сайте и возможно пишу не там, гду надо. Просто несколько дней назад смотрела ссылки на ER и набрела на Ваш сайт. Была ПРИЯТНО удивлена его теплом, но фанфики - это просто нет слов!))) Я вообще не знала, что кто-то этим может заниматься, да еще и так здорово - местами просто читая мои мысли))) Короче, вместо того, чтобы как умной девочке готовиться к экзамену, я с утра до глубокой ночи сидела перед монитором (даже ела перед ним). Сражена на повал талантом Железной Леди ее фанфик про Керри и Ким я прочла первым и просто рыдала, давно такого не было..И все остальные - просто ВОСТОРГ!!! нисколько не жалею о затраченном не на грызение гранита науки времени, тем более, что (наверное кто-то Сверху помог) злосчастный экзамен я все равно сдала))))! Пишите, жду с нетерпением! и спасибо, что Вы есть
Julia: Кажется, в нашей банде пополнение! Добро пожаловать,ray !
ray: спасибо))))
Мария: ray пишет: Здравствуйте)) Еще не совсем разобралась в сайте и возможно пишу не там, гду надо. Просто несколько дней назад смотрела ссылки на ER и набрела на Ваш сайт. Была ПРИЯТНО удивлена его теплом, но фанфики - это просто нет слов!))) Я вообще не знала, что кто-то этим может заниматься, да еще и так здорово - местами просто читая мои мысли))) Короче, вместо того, чтобы как умной девочке готовиться к экзамену, я с утра до глубокой ночи сидела перед монитором (даже ела перед ним). Сражена на повал талантом Железной Леди ее фанфик про Керри и Ким я прочла первым и просто рыдала, давно такого не было..И все остальные - просто ВОСТОРГ!!! нисколько не жалею о затраченном не на грызение гранита науки времени, тем более, что (наверное кто-то Сверху помог) злосчастный экзамен я все равно сдала))))! Пишите, жду с нетерпением! и спасибо, что Вы есть Ух ты!!! Не ожидала такого сюрприза!!! В нашей банде пополнение:)))) Такая приятная неожиданность! Добро пожаловать, ray:)) Рада, что фанфики не помешали сдаче экзамена! ПОЗДРАВЛЯЮ Я сама, когда пришла в инет впервые, первым делом начала читать фанфики - ВЗАХЛЕБ! Читала до рассвета в каком-то экстазе... ничего не соображала... а утром отправилась на работу У меня должны были быть занятия с 4 маленькими детьми! Хорошо, что пришли только двое, иначе бы я, наверное, откинулась прямо на рабочем месте И никакого сайта бы не было:))) Спасибо за оценку сайта и фанфиков:) В ближайшее время (простите, правда, времени катастрофически не хватает!) я выложу еще много работ наших одаренных форумчан-творцов!
жданова: Мария пишет: Ух ты!!! Не ожидала такого сюрприза!!! В нашей банде пополнение:)))) Такая приятная неожиданность! Добро пожаловать, ray:)) Очень рада пополнению нашей банды Привет, ray
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